Hello! Thanks for reviewing Touch!

I liked the short stanzas in this poem, particularly the last two lines. I'm not sure about the word betwixt though...I think the repetition of 'inside your arms' works well in the first two stanzas and you could continue it in the third. Also, I'm not sure 'enveloped' has the connotation you're looking for. Maybe something a little darker?

Anyway, I really like the short lines and stanzas, and the repeated last line. Very nice!

I love it

Aw! Very sweet! I loved the emotions!

This is a great poem. It really makes you think about it. Angsty yet...not!

very pretty! review back?