*mouth drops open* It was fantastic! I LOVED IT! I ALSO VERY HYPER! Update soon!

Heya! I like this story. You said you wanted corrections, so here they are: Instead of 'when I'm ** you',, it should be, depending on the tense you want to use, 'when I ** you in a few minutes' or 'while I'm ** you' and instead of 'getting ready to flung it' it should be 'getting ready to fling it'. K, then buh-bye ;D

Damn, being Jezebel sucks some major arse, eh? Poor girl. I likes, update soon?

Happy Holidays!

I do actually think that this chapter is hilarious, really I do! I dunno why...I just find it funny, is it supposed to be funny? Or am I just odd? lol. Okay, and hold up...is it appropriate to call the person who you think is about to rape you 'handsome'? 'Cause if a guy was about to rape me I would be thinking he was the most ugliest mofo on this planet, luv. Um, anyway, thank you for the entertaining chapter! It was quite interesting, hehe :)

I try to point out any errors, but I can't really see any

very interesting i love it can not wait to hear more keep up the good work.

I decided to review this part as well, it's good but YOU NEED TO UPDATEsorry it's just now you have more than just one story for me to nag you about so update Water or somthing so this way I'll leave you alone, well other than good reveiws, cuase your writing is awsome

well cya around

~Dalik~

aw! i feel so sorry for her, cant wait until she finds out about her powers so she can get back at all of them : ) great storey! i will be looking out for the next chapter but now i am going to Erich ; ) *mel

Creepy... love the whole red eye, black eye thing, it definitely catches attention. Why is it that bullies haven't evolved to pick out the non-psychic losers? I mean, you'd think they'd never seen carrie... or matilda... Speaking of which, what if Carrie and Jezebel ever met? Ok, ponderings are making head spin. Loved it, want more of it, done rambling.

More interesting-ness, lol. I hope your thinking of updating this soon too...! Wasn't boring at all, I like it :)

Anyway Ciao!