i think out of all your work (well outa the one's i read so far), this is my fav. i can relate very very very much to this one. i loved it!

rira-chan

wow, really good, *adds 2 favorites*, if you ever go to edit it though, you misspelled peace and the first line could be better, but great job

The last line seems to be a forced rhyme... its not the perfect ending but its justifiable... :)

But the rest of it is good!

I wonder why is it that as we get older we are filled with more and more hate rather than love for life?

Anyways, Good job!

plz review back :)

- Dreamforever101

All I could hear when I read this was the song Photograph, by Nickelback. It sounds a lot like that song. Well, nice job with this .

*::Cat::*