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| by His blood 2006-08-26 ch 1,  | abuse**, this hurts so much to read! this has been me for seventeen months, and it's so ** painful. you wrote this beautifully. |
| poetic abortion 2006-08-24 ch 1, | abuseLovely, lovely, lovely. ~* Noelle |
| alice is dying 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseAll the description in this...breathtaking |
| notthecreepyfatguy 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseThis made me sad but I enjoy the flow and rythm of your poetry. |
| chaos called creation 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseyou set the mood very well in this. great use of adjectives. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abusedamn. this hurts to read- kind of defeatist in a sense- but I wish I could have written it. some people can't pull off starting a poem with that & thing but you can, you genuinely can. and that last stanza just bleeds. |