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Nietzschean nightmares 2006-08-30 . chapter 1
This is one of the many reasons that you’re on my favourite authors list (definitely wasn’t a mistake). I don’t write poetry myself (I have a few (unsuccessful) attempts on my computer that should never see the light of day), I have a deep appreciation for well-written, emotive poetry like yours, Alice. This poem specifically is so remarkably raw and sharp; every word carries the tone perfectly. It’s very evocative, though it's hard to think of the pain behind the words.
realityescapesher 2006-08-28 . chapter 1
i love, love, love the opening line to this "Heartache tastes like regret (and second month anniversaries)" what an amazing way to start off a poem. i also love "and all.the.words I want to scream at you are c.r.a.m.m.e.d into my mouth" you captured the exact feeling with words. pure poetry.-aly
Ashes.to.Acid 2006-08-23 . chapter 1
Raw and intense. I wasn't expecting such a rush whenever I opened this..you captured my breath and I'm still searching for the words to tell you how beautiful this is. Keep up the good work!
strykr 2006-08-23 . chapter 1
I like this one too! I love the way you express yourself. It's so different and feeling. You scream everything I have been dying to say for years. Thank you!
by His blood 2006-08-23 . chapter 1
** raw and painful and beautiful, but the anger ... heartbreak, it screams and this is also so painful to read. **, this is amazing, but ... you don't deserve this at all.

♥ alison
chaos called creation 2006-08-23 . chapter 1
it's written with such a clarity, love how the ending tied everything together
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