 ValiantVerbiage 2009-11-10 . chapter 20PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE continue this. Please?
I like it. |
 BrokenBeyondBelief 2009-09-01 . chapter 1Aw... Sounds so sad... But sounds promising. Excited to read this!
B |
 SayMyNameBitch 2009-08-16 . chapter 20Hey bro, sorry if I sounded rude earlier while I was ranting about the whole Please-Update-This-Story-Before-My-Brain-Implodes thing.Falling off the face of planet earth is a pretty personal choice, and one that you're perfectly entitled to make if you so choose. We miss all really you though, not to mention your lovely cast of characters (Cough Lucien Cough), so please come back sometime soon.
BTW: my mistake, it's only been TWO years since you stopped applying your finger-pads to anything remotely resembling a key board, not three.
luv yall (Snuggles Lucien Plushie and coos to it in tone of swoony adoration) |
 SayMyNameBitch 2009-08-16 . chapter 20 Hey Shoes, I think "Dry Rain" is a great story (I LOVE Lucien: I would totally be his love-slave, 'Cam must be brain-damaged). But has anybody else noticed that this story HASN"T BEEN UPDATED SINCE 2007?!!? That's three freaking yrs, people!!WHY OH WHY have you forsaken your readers, Shoes? |
 firestar267 2009-04-16 . chapter 20I guess it serves me right for reading something your profile said was on hiatus 8-) because now im in a state of utter suspence.
Luciens very smart! But it wont work.
Youre very good at subtley layering hints at things, like camerons changing attitude towards Aerys, and at slowly building up Aerys change towards his surroundings and his moving on from the past. it makes it realistic.
...I kind of like lucien...hes fun to read. o.0
youre an excellent writer :) hope to see more of this soon? though like i said its my own stupid fault for reading :P - very glad i did though! |
 Bloodfeeder 2009-02-01 . chapter 20ohh, This sounds like it's just getting good!!1 And Lucien and Aerys sounds like a REALLY cute couple but of course Cam and A would be cuter.
I LOVE LUCIEN! He sounds so much like MME! lol. I always fall for the straight ones too. XD
Lee |
 Bloodfeeder 2009-02-01 . chapter 14what's WAFF? |
 Bloodfeeder 2009-01-31 . chapter 9OMg I HAVE to finish reading this tomorrow.
This story is absolutly captivating!
I can't read anymore now... -pout-
Lee |
 TimeOfYourLife 2008-12-30 . chapter 20Update now! I love the story, the whole idea of the little Catholic boy and little (former) prostitute. Cameron is so cute! He reminds me of Cameron in 10 Things I Hate About You. Lucien kinda creeps me out, though. When will we find out about Aerys' past and when will Cameron and Aerys finally hook up? I'm hooked to this story and why didn't I discover it sooner? |
 Vicious Hyperbolizer 2008-12-22 . chapter 20It's been around a year and a half since your last update, so I assume this story is on way the back burner, but I'll review anyway.
I love this. It's fantastic. I think Aerys' character might have transitioned from his original state to what he is now a bit too quickly, but that's no longer an issue. |
 iY 2008-07-03 . chapter 20 ah.. this is third person..been a long time since i read one. i love the concept by the way ^^ |
 the-truth-is-verity 2008-04-26 . chapter 20ah wow!
great story. im really worried that Lucien's going to end up hurting Aerys, though :/
anyway.
i love it regardless.
please update!! |
 Andra Sashner 2008-04-20 . chapter 19--your characters are. A little less personal introspection your smooth the story flow, to give a reader more weight into the flow (make the thought process part of the actual narration) and it would draw me in harder. Just a suggestion. Oh, and i'm online from my mobile to this reviewing this is difficult. And ficpress wouldn't let me add my continuation to the same chapter. Basically, you rock. Keep this up, and thanks for sharing. |
 Andra Sashner 2008-04-20 . chapter 20H've been reading and reviewing your work a little lately. It's been fun getting into each of your stories. On this one, trademark angst not too heavy. Still a good and solid relate-able read. Very life-like. Must sound strange to read those precise words but while every tale has that touch or feel of being unabashedly unreal, yours inspire considerations that these things could happen in real life. The reactions are a bit less dark than i might expect but that just draws me in more toward how very strong-- |
 yoda 2008-04-12 . chapter 1 aw.wat a cutey pie, its so sad alredy |