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iY 2008-07-03 ch 20, anon.	abuseah.. this is third person..been a long time since i read one. i love the concept by the way ^^
the-truth-is-verity 2008-04-26 ch 20,	abuseah wow! great story. im really worried that Lucien's going to end up hurting Aerys, though :/ anyway. i love it regardless. please update!!
tsubaki-dono 2008-04-20 ch 19,	abuse--your characters are. A little less personal introspection your smooth the story flow, to give a reader more weight into the flow (make the thought process part of the actual narration) and it would draw me in harder. Just a suggestion. Oh, and i'm online from my mobile to this reviewing this is difficult. And ficpress wouldn't let me add my continuation to the same chapter. Basically, you rock. Keep this up, and thanks for sharing.
tsubaki-dono 2008-04-20 ch 20,	abuseH've been reading and reviewing your work a little lately. It's been fun getting into each of your stories. On this one, trademark angst not too heavy. Still a good and solid relate-able read. Very life-like. Must sound strange to read those precise words but while every tale has that touch or feel of being unabashedly unreal, yours inspire considerations that these things could happen in real life. The reactions are a bit less dark than i might expect but that just draws me in more toward how very strong--
yoda 2008-04-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseaw.wat a cutey pie, its so sad alredy
Andrea 2008-03-28 ch 20, anon.	abusei don't think Lucien is a bad guy. just a bit misguided. he's been pining away 4 a year after all. i still think he's awesome, he just needs some luck in love. and i hope Cam realises his feelings sooner rather than later. i really enjoyed the story so far, along with ur other oneshots and wait patiently 4 more
Duuude 2008-02-12 ch 20,	abuseThe drama is pure awesome-tastic! Haha. Lucien is ba-a-a-d. lol With a sheep voice too! Cameron has feelings for Aerys already! OMG! OMG! OMG! That's fricken amazing. Lucien was cool and all in the beginning but now I just feel like saying '** you, go away'. Is that rude? lol No offense, Lucien. You're still cool. (Pstt. He's not really cool.) I hope they don't really pretend they're together. Aerys doesn't like him and Lucien doesn't like Aerys. It wouldn't even work. If they were to date and fall in love or something while Cameron had semi-feelings for Aerys it would be ultimate mayhem. Cameron, you naughty Catholic school boy, snag Aerys while you can! ... before someone else does. If he noticed his gorgeousness, someone else is bound to! And chaos will ensue, wait chaos will ensue anyway. On another note, I'm glad Jerome's ok. Until next time. =]
Duuude 2008-02-08 ch 18,	abuseWoo. Jerome is fricken bulimic? Didn't see that one coming... And Aiden is jealous of him? Wow. I cannot wait to hear the stories behing Lucien and Jerome. They're all so interesting, really. I love it. They eyes are extremely hot, I must say. I haven't seen em but someone has done it before with contacts. It's cool. I would love it, I wonder.. does he put contacts on because he hates how it reminds him of his father or something? You did hint at him not liking his father, didn't you? Hmm.. what's going on? Anyway, it is nonetheless exciting! I can't wait for the rest but for now I must leave. Tata, amazing story writer. Lovely story. Until next time. =]
Duuude 2008-02-08 ch 13,	abuseAW! The fight's over. I never like it when these two fight.. wait what am I saying? I've only just met them a few chapters back and it's basically the first time they'd fought. Anyway, the point is I'm glad it's over. And the hug was pure awesomeness. Mhm. Lovely.. I want more soon.
Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 2008-02-07 ch 2,	abuseWow~!! I was a bit turned off by some of the typos in the prelude, but I can say with satistfaction that you have regained my interest! =D I don't have much time now, but I will get to reading and hopefully reviewing the rest of the chapters. ^_^ Good job~!
re 2008-02-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseSweet! Captures attention easily!
Duuude 2008-02-04 ch 7,	abuseLovely chapter! He smiled! Yay! Beautiful, indeed. Aww, Cameron's thinks he's adorable and Aerys was all blushing and cute.^^ Mhhm.. This story is coming along really well. I love it! I cannot wait for their relationship to build. At first it seems like Aerys is getting over it too quickly but it's obvious that he's nowhere near ready. Even Cam's orphancy's a touchy subject for him. It's pretty nice. Lovely story, once again! Muah. =]
Duuude 2008-02-04 ch 2,	abuseOMGSH. So amazing, you do not know how into it I am right now. So this review will be short. Not that I've ever been one to leave long reviews. What can I say, I'm a person of few words. It actually depends on the situation. Anyway, more reading for me. I probably won't be able to stop. This is addicting! Beautiful writing, I already love Cameron. Same goes for Aerys. I'm think you pronounce that Aries? Hope so. Sounds nice that way. xD
Duuude 2008-02-04 ch 1,	abuseOH so this is the review button?! OH! xD Mhmm. Me love. Freedom, glorious freedom. I feel really happy! He's free! And the story has just begun! Yay! It IS still sad though... Sex slave? He was a sex slave?! That is just so inhumane. I... ARGH! I can't even speak without feeling like killing fictional characters.. So anger won't help. It DOES exist though, so I guess I can channel my anger in some direction. Damn pedophiles. ** hell, I'll just continue reading this fantabulous story. Gotta love the big, watery anime eyes! Haha. =]
Acta Sanctorum 2008-01-25 ch 1,	abuseI wish so much that you would continue to write this great story! :3

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