i have never read anything like this before, and i like the style you wrote it in...i also loved the lines 'once upon a time is…/glass dolls in g l a s s cases/she only (so.lonely) used to/kiss.'

**. i dont even know what to say. its a favefavefave!

I ** love you man. I didn't even see that last little afternote. I really loved this poem. Your nonsensical use of punctuation is something No one else can replicate. It's all so perfect. And personally I like yours ALOT better.

Mos

have you ever read ee cummings?it's very ee cummings-y.i like it.