I can relate to your summary real well. Lol. Yea, no one seems to really understand what I write either. NO ONE UNDERSTAND ME! Does that sound melodramatic? Lolzo. I can sound really emo sometimes...which is funny because I'm so against the emo life.

Anywho, rambling me set aside, I really do like this poem. Maybe it's because it got that same feel of (above) misunderstood air that mine do.

"As crumbled up memories left to lay on the bathroom floor" I live for poem lines like this. I also love the end oft this so, if no one understand this you can at least be content with the knowledge that it sent my mind into a frenzied love fest. lol. A rather depressed love fest but yet, I love you all the same.

ANNA

sorry about the really strange review there...I've been doing nothing all day, haven't socialized for about half a week, so I really don't know what I'm talking about anymore. Lol.

you were right not exactly understandable but I guess it good

wow, great poem, i really like the "poetic crimes" part, keep up the good work!

I like it. And even though, yes, I DON'T understand it well, I know what it's like to spout random words that make sense to no one but yourself.

It's quite beautiful.