Cool.

I think the help in italics might really bring this out a bit, but it works well. simple yet sometimes they are the best.

I really love this one because it holds so much emotion.

Great Job!

XOXO

This is so short and bleak...but at the same time it's moving and intense..wonderful job of blending these emotions into something so powerful (albiet hopeless)...

i liked this one a lot too.

rira-chan

Sometimes it helps to scream. Sometimes it helps to cry. I think sometimes it even helps to alternate.