|Reviews for Fallling Apart|
| Pandakun84 9/13/06 . chapter 1
| citrus scented 9/1/06 . chapter 1
I think the help in italics might really bring this out a bit, but it works well. simple yet sometimes they are the best.
| MidnightStar005 8/29/06 . chapter 1
I really love this one because it holds so much emotion.
| Chaos Apple 8/23/06 . chapter 1
This is so short and bleak...but at the same time it's moving and intense..wonderful job of blending these emotions into something so powerful (albiet hopeless)...
| rira-chan 8/23/06 . chapter 1
i liked this one a lot too.
| Ashelin 8/23/06 . chapter 1
Sometimes it helps to scream. Sometimes it helps to cry. I think sometimes it even helps to alternate.