I'm going through this.

I HATE IT!

lovely. the ending is astounding. short but sweet.

Aw, this is so pretty. I really do love how it's so short and sweet. The last line was a great way to end it. =P ~Sara

Short but sweet. 100 percent perfection, honestly. It's like the kind of thing you might scibble on the bottom of a page in a notebook... That perfect piece of poetry that sounds incredible and can completely stand alone. I love the way it starts, though, too. "As," makes it almost... narrative. And then the last line makes it more real, more personal with the question. I love it. Oo and the next "heart break" not the next "prince charming." Like sarcastic but hopeful at the same time. Bravo.

I love this

oh wow... this is just amazing. its so short but so perfect.

While it's a little too embellished (the first line italics, double parentheticals) I do like the way the third line is bold and sticks out, and I love the way the periods cause dead stops between the words in the last line.

Just because it's short doesn't mean it's no good!

short sweet and beautiful. i love it.

I agree..its short but it does feel complete!Good job! I like it!plz review back :)

- Dreamforever101

very short.. but to the point and very true... i enjoyed it. but i always enjoy all of your stuff