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| Myst, The Dark Knight 2006-08-24 ch 1,   | The rythym at first was off but from there it was really smooth and flowing. Very expressive, love the way you ended it. Overall I think it was a good poem that got your point across very clearly, great stuff! Keep writing! ~Myst. |