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| Guardrail 2006-08-26 ch 1,  | abuseVery sad and well written. There's a lot of emotion in this poem. I especially liked the lines, "For once, She wants destiny to comfort her." Great work. |
| Goodnight Evalynne 2006-08-24 ch 1, | abuseHa ha ha, I'm on your acount!! But I'm reviewing to you. This is really perty!! Hum, I wonder when you wrote this... |
| gold against the soul 2006-08-24 ch 1, | abuse"Again she steps downOn the scaleTo determine her day" I can relate to these lines so much. I thought the poem was well-written, well-expressed and thoughtful. Good job. gold against the soul |