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| La Gitane 2006-10-08 ch 1,  | abuseOh I liked that. I liked the way you work circles in the poem and ideas. It's quite a sharp look at the prostitutes and their image... Very well written, and the last three lines are most striking. |
| Modulated 2006-08-24 ch 1, | abuse... the hell? Very good but... *whoosh* flew right over my head. |
| bread and circuses 2006-08-24 ch 1, | abuseOoh, I love! 'Bubonic couture' - man, that's a great line. I love the contrasts here, and I like the rhyme. Favourite! |