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La Gitane
2006-10-08
ch 1,
abuseOh I liked that. I liked the way you work circles in the poem and ideas. It's quite a sharp look at the prostitutes and their image... Very well written, and the last three lines are most striking.
Modulated
2006-08-24
ch 1,
abuse... the hell?

Very good but...

*whoosh*

flew right over my head.
bread and circuses
2006-08-24
ch 1,
abuseOoh, I love! 'Bubonic couture' - man, that's a great line. I love the contrasts here, and I like the rhyme. Favourite!
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