oh.. wow. i love how you wrote this. i love the feeling behind it.

Personality, I don't really like you format your things - but that's just me. I love the writting and this piece was - beautifully morbid. Great job!Thanks for reviewing more of my work!~Rowan~

This is a poem that only someone with a REAL gift for writing could write...You know someone that could teach me everything I know about writing. Now who? could that be?? *looks left and right* lol.

Love, yours truly, Ellen

thanks for the review. I Really like the way you write. keep it up. originality is key and you have it.

There are emotions dripping off of every word of this. This is raw and powerful and terrible and beautiful all at once. I loved the line, “Alice decided to find out by carving away her face.” Simply amazing work.

Marvelous rush of emotion. The way that the emotions bounce off of each other to create the flow. Well constructed and formatted. The portrait of the situation painted is very visual. Excellent work.

Your work is so...emotional. I don't know how else to put it. It just screams at you, blantant, beautifl...It shows alot. And alot seems to be very sad.If you even need to talk to someone, just drop me a line. My e-mails up on my main page I beleive. *hugs*

Beautifully morbid. I liked it!