Reviews for Wish: Welcome to the Battle City

Reviews For: Wish: Welcome to the Battle City - Reviews: Page 1 of 3

Shiranui Akatsuki 2007-01-09 ch 3,	abuseFinally! Finally! You've finally updated! Hey, speed up with the next chapter please! This is one hell of a chapter, man. Wow. I wonder what's next...
SirScott 2007-01-08 ch 3,	abuseGreat chapter well worth the wait. I still wonder who the host is? Keep up the good work. ~SirScott
felicia13 2007-01-05 ch 3,	abusedies from shame Sorry, YJan. I should've edited the chapter ... I lost track of time and just never got around to it. But, Ragnarok! Awesome job, buddy. Seriously. It's got crazy action and Zora's mad-hyped up on blood lust. I can't wait for this to get started ... have fun with my character and be nice; she bites. ;D So ... Sloan. Hardcore bad guy. I love him so bad. I can't even stand it. Only thing I regret about leaving the group. I do ... I love Sloan so bad. It's crazy. But it's a true story. He's such a badass in this story ... is crazy-attached to Sloan Maybe I should make him be in my story ... he could be Xania's **buddy or something ... Ok. Awesome work, Ragnarok! Group: get yo'asses on this! Because it's hardcore again! Woot! The Writer Formerly Known As Felicite.
Bleu Ciel 2006-10-19 ch 2,	abuseWow, too many characters XD I had to go back to Chapter1 couple o' times just to get the characters right! Is the Seth that just showed up my Seth from "Chronicles of Twilight," or a different writter's Seth?
Bleu Ciel 2006-10-19 ch 1,	abuseReally well written, guys! I have to say, I'm impressed. All of the characters have their own goals and distinct emotions, and yet something made them all the same: they would risk their lives for the ultimate wish. If there's still space open, I wish to add my character, Takehiko Minoru from "Chronicles of Dusk" in the story. Although we have all these different characters, I'd like an idiot to be one of them, and a cool idiot at that ^^ If there IS space, can someone reply to this and tell me to whom I should send my character intro to.
SympleSymon 2006-10-12 ch 2,	abuseWoo! Awesome battles all round, and the tournament hasn't even begun! Can't wait... aka Stargazer
SympleSymon 2006-10-12 ch 1,	abuseSo, here we have it...the majority of the entrants to the Tournament! Really well written for a crossover (in other words, whereas the contrast of writing styles could've ruined it, it actually helped strengthen the piece), and I can only begin to imagine how long it took to get together! Kudos all round! Aka Stargazer
brokendreams21 2006-10-06 ch 2,	abuseRomance on a battlefield? Very interesting. I'd laugh if there was some sort of love triangle created. Gosh, that'd be so twisted...and edging towards some soapiness. Anyways, back to the story. Sorry if I'm a bit biased but I still love Zora's attitude and her 'super powers'. I just love her strength. Another really well written chapter. I can see that this is just the beginning...so keep up the awesome job!
brokendreams21 2006-10-06 ch 1,	abuseI finally found the time to click the link thingy on Felicia's page...well, I really like the way all of the characters were introduced. The whole 'wish' thing is a very interesting plot idea and I must say, it'll be interesting to see the authors fight this one out. (Unless the ending has already been determined.) Well, onwards to the next chapter. Awesome job!
Shiranui Akatsuki 2006-09-23 ch 2,	abuseWhoa, nice one. the story's already up and running! yay! I've been waiting a dreadfully long time for it. who does Arian delong to anyway? I couldn't find him in any of the aka Meteor-infinity's group of writers...
wolfblood82 2006-09-21 ch 2,	abuseOk, interesting chapter on this. Like the way how Dante stood up for Zora even though she could deal with the generic thugs. Like the part where Saya and Zora teamed up to pwn the thugs' asses. I sorta see a Dante-Zora pairing and Arian/Seth-Kiki pairing as well... actually for me, my favorite character is Dante mostly due to the fact that I've read Angel Halo. I was actually thinking that he could some vampire badass with god-like potential...
SirScott 2006-09-20 ch 2,	abuseWho's hosting the tournament? It would have to be a powerful being to be able to grant the winner any wish. Dante and Zora would make a cute couple. Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, ~SirScott~
Outlaw02 Extreme 2006-09-20 ch 2,	abuseHey there, Outlaw-2 here, Whoa.. Somehow, I'm getting pulled by this group's stories. No, really, I'm totally glued to the proses you make up. This is by far one of the more unique stories ever made. It's a chore to actually merge several storylines into one, but so far, it's going smoothly. There's on or two hiccups you have though. You guys did use a new paragraph for the characters to conversate. However, it should be this way... EXAMPLE (Taken from the story :P) “You’re not getting away from me,” Zora hissed. She ran forward and slammed an elbow into his back as he fled. He fell forward with a cry and skidded across the jagged rocks. Zora dropped down and lowered herself to his neck, piercing the flesh there with her fangs. The blood was sour, but that didn’t matter. She wished to relish this kill. You see, the one you did in the story was actually technically wrong. It should be this way. “You’re not getting away from me,” Zora hissed. She ran forward and slammed an elbow into his back as he fled. He fell forward with a cry and skidded across the jagged rocks. Zora dropped down and lowered herself to his neck, piercing the flesh there with her fangs. The blood was sour, but that didn’t matter. She wished to relish this kill. Once the character finished speaking, go on to a new paragraph. That's what I learned from my English teacher, who is a little obsessed with British English :/, and its slang. Other than that, it was off to a good start. Also, from what I had said from my other reviews, go ahead and use my characters. So long you keep them in character, I have nothing against it. :P Other than that, once again, I think I should wrap up my review. I can feel that it's getting too long for comfort. I'll be waiting for the next chapter! Sincerely, Outlaw-2 Member of The Phoenix Souls
The Melody of a Broken Hear... 2006-09-20 ch 2,	abuseFANTASTICAL CHAPTER (even tho I revised it lol) I have to congrats the two of the aka meteor infinity memebers who wrote this. Even though you two are excellent writers, there is always room for improvment. I hope that my little editing did the trick for those grammar problems. If you found some grammar mistakes... than "f" "u" lol i took 2-3 hours trying to read this and edit at the same time. I know its not perfect, but yeah I tried to correct as many grammar errors I could while keeping the same style fulently through the chapter... Anyways... AWESOMERFIC CHAPTER I wanted to do sonmething more with Zora, Dante and Saya but left it as it is. The battle between Arian and Sloan was fantastic, I edit a few things but overall fantasic. I gave a more humorous feeling between Kiki and Arian without distrupting the original writings. I also made Seth more fun of a character just a little. I have nothing else to say but give me more work to do ^_^ na, just playing. I might revised the prologue, mwhahahahaha. Anyways, I had my fun, I can't wait for my character to make an appearance, so bad ** lol. Saint Narciso ~ aka Prodigy
The Melody of a Broken Hear... 2006-09-20 ch 1,	abuseI read this long ago but haven't gotten the chance to review it! This is an awesome story and glad that it has been made by this group. What makes it so interesting is that I was also coming up with my own story called "Versus Crossover" that feature characters from most of my own stories. But this story features characters from different authors, which is so totally cool. Not only that, I really really want one or two of my characters to participate in this tournament ^_^ not as fighters but as the overseers, so nobody cheats or does anything against the rules. They would like prevent any chaos from happening and could easily take care of it My characers are uber powerful and most likely undefeated against the fighters in this story so it will be unfair for them to fight... since they also don't need a wish. They are the bouncers of the tournament mwhahahaha lol and they can't be messed with, and if somebody tries to start something with them, they have the license to beat the crap of that character lol. Me and my crazy unlimited possbility imagination lol... where does it stop... never! Saint Narciso aka Prodigy~aka Meteor Infinity~

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