This is great too, very powerful. I'm a pacifist too so I can see where you are coming from with this. Nicely written, well done!vix x

I like the piece, how ever the title is slightly offensive. Hate the war not the warrior. I’m sure most people don’t want to be involved in this sort of conflict. But, I still understand what you’re saying.

very good political peice here, very strong and emotive. :) I really like it alot. :D keep it up. you're a great writer x

so when was the last time you were a soldier?

You know what I will say. This is a great poem and the ending line was brill!

great perseption on the topic. _ lovely poem. i liked it very much.

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