wow, the start was REALLY powerful. A very interesting peice. I really like it, this is going on my favs too. Keep it up xx

reminds me of things i rather try to resist

Really good flow, and it managed to not be cliched as are poems of this topic often. Great job.

Is this addiction what I think it is? If it is, you know I'm here to help you when in need. Anyways, I love how the verses and the words flow, it's creative!

Okay, this got me a bit worried...What's up? Trust me, I know ALOT about Addiction...But nice poem