Truly a beautiful poem.Three verses, four lines each, yet each sounding so powerful.It's rather difficult for me to pick my favorite part, though I am particularly fond of the last verse.

This is going in my favorites.

I am truly impressed.

blink backwards and considerthe shape before it broke;globed fruit beyond the worldframedew-skinned and whole.

I bow to the power of your patchwork poem. "Less than stellar", indeed. I scoff. For you, there is no such thing. :) `~bella~`

Beautiful.

You mention Antigone and peace and, oh, my heart! Love this; it was amazing beyond words could describe.

Pure and utterly LOVELY.

~* Noelle

I like this a lot - I'd love it if you included the translation of "fidus et audux" in the author's note or something, it's a very cool phrase :) Regardless, this is gorgeous! Good stuff. I can't choose a favorite part, it's really a wonderful poem and I am adding it to my favorites.