There's a question for you!! :) It makes you think, doesn't it. I suppose it was meant to. It almost seems like a parody of innocence. Which I like, seeing as how I myself am a parody of innocence. :) Just beautiful. `~bella~`

Sweet and simple, love the last line, kind of reminds me of my own sister.

Beautiful.

That last line was chilling and you painted childhood mixing with adulthood (teenhood?) so eloquently, it breaks me. The lines string together nicely; the forma is clear, concise, and pretty; and, oh my god, you made such a touching poem out of a subject that has been done and done to death but, oh my god, you did make it beautiful.

Love it, just lovely in every sense of the word.

~* Noelle