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WolfDemon7 2007-03-18 . chapter 7
Muhahahah! cliffhanger of doom!


But... OMG WHAT tHE HECK IS GOING TO HAPPEN! AH! RUN LINOS RUN! HE'S GONNA KIL YOU!

((btw i've added a new story))
Moontan 2006-08-31 . chapter 3
This chapter really does make the reader beg the question: will the judge be saved? And is he worth saving, or is he just self righteous? At least that what goes through my mind in this chapter.
Neaera 2006-08-27 . chapter 3
Oh revenge is fun :o) sometimes. Try to stay away from caps, but whatever floats your boat! Keep it up!
WolfDemon7 2006-08-27 . chapter 3
CREEPY -shivers-! Good work on the judge's point of view though haha! You can really tell that he's a priest.judge thing because of his last line.

GREAT JOB BREE!!
Moontan 2006-08-26 . chapter 2
I'm a sucker for vampire stories, so I had to read. :)So far I like the premise, and you're doing a lot of good descriptions. The only thing I found lacking is that Seth seemed to know exactly what to do once he was up. I wish you'd elaborate more on how. :)
WolfDemon7 2006-08-26 . chapter 2
Is seth a vampire now? WY SETH WHY!! YOu make me want to...

La la... sike!

Another great chapter Bree... yet i would still like to know why Seth wanted to go back! Hmm...
WolfDemon7 2006-08-26 . chapter 1
I CAN REVIEW IT NOW!

WHY SETH WHY! I don't know anything about you but... WHY ARE YOU IN HEL!? -cry-

Damn you Lucifer... damn you to... urself! lol

This story is great Bree, seriously! It just screams AWSOMENESS!... i want Seth to live... even though he may be a murderous, swine of a man.. he had a cool name!
Neaera 2006-08-25 . chapter 2
*smiles* This is incredibly facinating. How did you come up with such a good idea? Brillant! I hope you continue with this, it has great potential :o) Keep it up!!
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