Is that the end? Better not be.

I like this.

:) CD

An extreamly thrilling tale you should write a book

THAT B... not gonna say it but you know what and who I mean.

Nos die now.

:) CD

so he did get a scratch but it didn't mark him? why would that be?

:) CD

Elliot stole my line.

XD CD

suspense, suspense. hehhs
interesting plot. it's a nice read. :)

Well... *pause*

CRAP!!

XD CD

Interesting. Lex sounds like a guy you either hate on sight, or after a bit of conversation you get to like him. Sounds like for Maggie, it was the latter of the two.

:) CD

This is some riveting stuff. Elliot didn't blast her head off, so cool. Again, I really liked the interaction between your characters. So organic and natural. I need lots more practice with that. Oh yeah, thanks for that review, glad to see that you enjoyed it somewhat.

Of course he's not.

:) CD

Magravine would really be a catch, I mean, when she likes someone she really likes them, right? He shot her with a blessed bullet and still she's completely concerned with his safety. I can't wait to see where you take this.

EE!! I did.

W00t for Maggie!

:) CD

CREEPY!!

but cool.

:) CD

Yey, Maggie's gonna learn about her parents... Well, I think she deserves it! Hm. What's up with Lee? Amnesia thingy?

Update soon, please!

Way cool, pugz! The plot's really thickening now... Poor Lee, he's gonna be like Mag now... At least, something -is- going on between Mag and Elliot... Well, I'll read the next chappie now. -->