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| cbprice25 2008-05-27 ch 10,  | abuseLooking forward to more (must leave now; sleep beckons). |
| Pione 2008-04-30 ch 10, | abuse*sigh* I'm in love with your characters. :) |
| P 2008-04-26 ch 10, anon. | abuseYou seriously need to update. :( I miss your story. |
| MackayFire 2008-04-25 ch 10, | abuseThis story is beyond amazing! Sophie is so darn cool that I want her as my new best friend. Great work :) |
| P 2008-03-01 ch 10, anon. | abuseHave I told you how much I like your story? Well, I do! Heehee, I'll keep waiting for updates, yeah? :) |
| P 2008-02-29 ch 3, anon. | abuseI really like your story. It's good so far. :D |
| BetterbyDesign 2008-02-22 ch 10, | abuseThis story is a nice big breath of fresh air. Sophie is such a unique character and so well-developed that I started seeing her as *real*. Theo is perfect for her, and even if they hadn't ended up 'together' or even slightly romantically involved, it still would have been great because he's such a great friend to her. The story doesn't really have a lot happening by way of big, dramatic events; I could see this happening to anybody who goes on a road trip with their friend, and the fact that it's so believably simple, and yet is so insightful and actually *funny* (not the contrived humor that's all situational humor and superficial). Wow, I think this is one of my longest reviews ever. I'm genuinely surprised that there aren't more reviews for this story! |
| ImaginaryGirlChild 2008-01-20 ch 10, | abuseI hope you'll be writing more to this story. I really, really love it. Everything is so realistic. |
| LondonLi 2008-01-19 ch 10, anon. | abuseThere was quite a wait for this chapter, but boy did they make progress! I just hope they keep going forward and don't really mess it up. I don't think Sophie (or I) is built for angst! Great update. |
| A Perfect Sonnet 2007-10-23 ch 2, | abuseOh Kansas. I knew it. I knew it was Laughlin, Kansas. I'm from Kansas (I think Laughlin's fairly close to me. Or was-I'm in Boston now.) and they just sounded like midwest kids. So compliments there. I can't really write a coherent review right now, sorry sorry. It's really late and my brain is shut down, I just had to comment on the Kansas thing real quick. I'll write you a really good, effort-filled review later to make up for this bit of swill. Promise. |
| Cynical Romance 2007-08-15 ch 9, | abuseOh man. I adore this story. Sophie is a very unique character - something that isn't as common in stories anymore. I adore all the humor, too. OH! And I would like to point out that I'm going to be moving to Eureka, Cali. soon. I just liked how you mentioned it. That's pretty fantastic! |
| Tatiana Moore 2007-04-25 ch 9, | abuseSorry I didn't review a while back! I hope you're doing well! Well... dang, I was hoping to get into Theo's mind more and figure out what the heck is going on. You've got me thoroughly confused, which is really good because it keeps me wanting more! Great work... I did notice a few missing letters and little typos, but nothing distracting. Great to see a new chapter in this story. Again, sorry that I didn't review it right away! |
| Barukisu 2007-04-12 ch 9, anon. | abuseWord by word, I'm getting absorbed by this dry humour. Sophie is just simply eccentric and I love her to bits! Have you ever thought of writing something philosophic? There is just something about your writing that makes me turn deep in thoughts...maybe it's just me...hmm... |
| SpawnMeister666 2007-04-11 ch 9, | abuseAs always a good update, and this is becoming one of my favorite stories on the site. I'm already looking forwards to the next installment! Spawny |
| GoddessofBlue 2007-04-08 ch 9, | abuseLove the story. Can't wait to read the rest!! Keep posting! |