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Reviews For: Unjust Slayers: Lykhara's Tale
Moontan 2006-08-30 . chapter 2
Interesting setup so far. While not entirely unique, this story has a few leads and elements from many others but they've been twisted into their own story. There's a few errors, which I've pointed out in another medium, and sometimes the flow seems a little halted, but I'm interested enough to keep reading.
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