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| Violet Marx 2006-11-25 ch 1,  | abuseI don't know, I think this one is very cute. I like 'the world is at my fingertips' and '(don't wake me up just yet)'. |
| the.pink.life 2006-09-12 ch 1, | abuseOh, I love what you have done with this poem! It's so simple, but the way you've bolded those words and made them into their own litle statement was so clever. This is just so peaceful to read. It's gorgeous. Keep writing! :) |
| classic violet 2006-08-27 ch 1, | abuseshort and sweet. perfect ending. |
| boys kiss girls 2006-08-26 ch 1, | abuseThis makes me want to go to Gloria's. Right now. "It's a good thing that's not the eleventh time that helicopter has flown by..." Fantastic descriptions. Aww... Max. (Last night was SO fun). |
| Aquafied 2006-08-24 ch 1, | abuseisnt it amazing how sleeping in is so tempting when the day is so beautiful i dont have those days |