This is BEAUTIFUL! Thanks for your review and I'm not discouraged, I just started writing poems, so I should get better in time. I guess we all have writer's block and I totally HATE it! But I'm glad this poem helped you 'Cure' it(writer's block). Keep writing!

Very good, the rhyming is well thought out. I've tried curing writers block by writing about it but it never worked. However, this is very good. Well done.