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| dress her up in fairytales 2006-08-25 ch 1, | abusei guess this is supposed to be a song... i GUESS due to the repetition of some verses. i'm not very fond of the format and i think the "&" are overused but the message is conveyed well and i can relate beautifully. |
| Femme de Dieu 2006-08-24 ch 1, | abuseWell, then it must be AWESOME, because this sounds just wonderful the way you've done it. And the message is oh, so clear. I would buy this song just for the lyrics. Great job! Truly, Tourterelle |