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Reviews For:
Jacob and Sarah
Freaked
2006-08-27 . chapter 1
You are such a beautiful writer.
rust phoenix
2006-08-25 . chapter 1
I like this poem, the rhyming doesn't seem forced at all. I like how the chorus changes slightly each time. The last line was my favorite part, it makes you think.
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