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| Storygirl 2007-07-09 ch 1,  | Hey! I've only had time to get through the first chapter, but this story is brilliant so far! I'll be sure to get back on here soon and finish reading what you've posted. It's awesome!... |
| Reaper 2007-05-10 ch 3,  | Update. Now. Please. This is awesome. Reminds me of me and my flatmates, except minus a woman. I loved the Halo 2 part in Chap 2. Chap 1 was about condoms, smokes and crushing clocks. Great. 3 was...I don't know what that was about. This story has no plot, has brilliant lines and hardly any real romance **. This is what comedy movies should be made of. Keep the writing rolling, ~Reaper |
| Dina JB 2006-09-04 ch 3, | I'm addicted so now you have to hurry up and update this! It's one of my favourites already ~dina~ |
| Dina JB 2006-09-04 ch 2, | I love this story- he tried to ** through her door? Classic. Gross, but hilarious. I was also reading your profile and I think we share a birthday I'm a leo/virgo birthday girl as well and you like all the same movies I do you sound interesting anyway onto the other chapters ~dina~ |
| Redeemed 2006-08-31 ch 3, | Wow. I can't get over how realistic your style is. There's a lot of fun in this story, and I just love it. Keep on writing; I have ya marked. |
| Redeemed 2006-08-27 ch 2, | This is absolutely freakin hilarious. Even if your grammar isn't all perfect, the content is amazing. "True friendship is when one man offers to lube another." Seems like to lived through something similar to this, which would have been awesome. |
| Danielle Thamasa 2006-08-25 ch 1, | Interesting story so far. The only thing I would like to point out is when Faith is thinking something it would be easier to understand if the words were in italics. This is good so far...I'm not one who really enjoys romances(probably because I've never experienced romance myself). I believe I caught two spelling mistakes but they were minor so I wouldn't really worry about it. Danielle Thamasa |
| twilight-x 2006-08-25 ch 1, | Hahaha the beginning of this was absolutely hilarious. I feel like I want to kill my alarm clock sometimes too XD Can't wait to see how this turns out. |