i really love the description, though the end was very cliche. i enjoyed the beautiful imagery, however. nice.

Aw, this is so sweet and cute. Lovely imagery and descriptions. I really liked the last stanza. =D ~Sara

I love it. The contrast you make with the speaker being small against the universe is very nicely done. It can be interrupted in many ways I think, which in poetry is always good. Speaking to the reader is a goal of poetry and if you can reach out with such a simple subject and hit home then you really have a gift.