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| Ben Wuest 2006-10-02 ch 1,   | thought you quit writing these sad poems? oh well...I've been missing hearing from you lately, so I had Adam (not the ex, but the best friend) add you on MSN. Trust him, won't you? He's a good friend of mine and, as you did with me and Kate, I want him to be yours as well. Anyway, I love you, J, and I hope you're doing well. Evanescence come's out tomorrow... I'm excited. Should I buy it or are you sending me one yet? Not pestering you, of course, just asking... B. Love you. |
| simpleplan13 2006-10-01 ch 1, | sad and powerful... well written |
| denialsworld 2006-10-01 ch 1, | 'I may be beaming, but inside I’m screaming,' That line reminds me of myself about two years ago. This is an amazing poem! xx |
| xDistortedReALiTyx 2006-09-03 ch 1, | I love it...its perfect.keep it up.--pammy-- x3 |
| Nine-Black-Roses 2006-08-31 ch 1, | another brilliant poem tho its so sad.youv put the emotions thru this one really wellwell donex |
| The Unforgettable Sound 2006-08-27 ch 1, | ...I found myself almost crying. Reminded me of my dad... It made me quite sad. HAHA RHYME! Wait, I think that's how you spell that word... God, I wish I could write like you...*wonders how you do it* |
| fragileHeart101 2006-08-26 ch 1, | Nice use of words. Still too sad for my liking :(x |
| method acting 2006-08-25 ch 1, | fabulous angst, as always, love. Great descriptions and you had a couple lines in there that just sucked punched me. Great great job. |
| Leaving Here 2006-08-25 ch 1, | i love these to lines: I may be beaming, but inside I’m screaming,I don’t dare to say what I fail to write, you are really talented. do someting with it... |
| k. 2006-08-25 ch 1, | this is good. lil worried tho...love you xo |
| Chaos Apple 2006-08-25 ch 1, | This is like some door being slammed in your face-you love the wood work but it doesn't do much for you. It's a gorgeous poem, really, and I think the problem's with me. I just don't feel it, y'know? |
| Jess..ISHKA!! 2006-08-25 ch 1, | This is realy good! I love it! =)Though did make me cry =( but that's a good thing in some ways {no idea why I'm writing like this}Yay! Mum just gave a gaytime =) you know the ice creams {so off topic} haven't had one in years =P Love You Josh XoXoXoXoXo |
| Hidden Lies 2006-08-25 ch 1, | I love this poem. It is really REALLY good. (cn you believe I almost wrot 'food'? ^.^) Awesome work.! (bad punctuation there but wft?) |
| Melanie Layugan 2006-08-25 ch 1, | Whoa. Beautiful. Absouluely beautiful. The flow and the raw emotion. Can't wait for your upcoming works. Melanie |
| Princess-anna57 2006-08-25 ch 1, | Hi Josh! :D I must say, this is so angsty! But so well written! I must applaud you, so *applaudes*. lol. It's great. Hope all is well, and keep posting more poems soon! ~Anna~ ^_^ |