this was a really good first chapter! I love how you portrayed Tom. I am still a bit confused as to who he is/was, but not in a the-author-forgot-to-mentnion-something kind of way. more like a o-suspence-y-ness kinda way. ^^ anyway...I'll be keeping an eye on this story, I look forward to reading more!

~SN~

hmm intresting hey if this gets more added to it i'll continue reading it though I have to laugh cause the main character Simone has the same name as my mom ^_^ well kudos on a job well done!

till next review Ja-ne

~ Cat ~

I thought that maybe Tom was dead from how you spoke of him in the text. I am eager to find out their connection and why the water in the shower seemed cold.

hm, intriguing piece you have here. certainly piqued my curiosity on several levels. hope you continue, because i'll be sure to keep my eye on it.

For a starting chapter, this was pretty nice, and left me with a few questions of who is Tom to her? What happened to him? What type of fragment dreams does she have? And why is she so caught in her past? I seriously hope you continue this story, although you haven't updated since the twenty-fifth.