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| Noihseret 2007-01-13 ch 1,  | abusethis was a really good first chapter! I love how you portrayed Tom. I am still a bit confused as to who he is/was, but not in a the-author-forgot-to-mentnion-something kind of way. more like a o-suspence-y-ness kinda way. ^^ anyway...I'll be keeping an eye on this story, I look forward to reading more! ~SN~ |
| SkyLark555 2007-01-09 ch 1, | abusehmm intresting hey if this gets more added to it i'll continue reading it though I have to laugh cause the main character Simone has the same name as my mom ^_^ well kudos on a job well done! till next review Ja-ne ~ Cat ~ |
| Demon-Ashes 2006-09-26 ch 1, | abuseI thought that maybe Tom was dead from how you spoke of him in the text. I am eager to find out their connection and why the water in the shower seemed cold. |
| EnigmaticArsenic 2006-09-25 ch 1, | abusehm, intriguing piece you have here. certainly piqued my curiosity on several levels. hope you continue, because i'll be sure to keep my eye on it. |
| Mosaic Stains 2006-09-24 ch 1, | abuseFor a starting chapter, this was pretty nice, and left me with a few questions of who is Tom to her? What happened to him? What type of fragment dreams does she have? And why is she so caught in her past? I seriously hope you continue this story, although you haven't updated since the twenty-fifth. |