Wow, I never realized this was for that ** idiot that down-talked you and Kait in her collection. What an **. Seriously.

24 Over Insomnia is my favorite collection of poetry in this entire world, and I want to personally bitchslap the ** that said it's "cliche" and "trite."

I love your style and what you write, too. I can't believe some people are so incredibly pathetic that they have to say things like to try to embarrass people that they don't like. Fine, the idiot doesn't like your work, but s/he doesn't have to try to ruin you (which would be pretty much impossible... it's fictionpress you ** morons)... God now I'm so **.

Here I am, trying to enjoy my most favorite poetry in the world, and I decide to click on reviews, and I see that CLICHE, TRITE **. UGH. I'm ** off.

You did the right thing, throwing all this ** back in his/her pathetic, disgusting face. The truth DOES hurt, doesn't it?

-stix-

oh wow, so I guess you wrote this a year ago and have plenty of reviews, but I have to tell you that this is amazing... really, you're brilliant!

This is gorgeous, and it REALLY hit home.

Afraid to ruin the awe...

l0lz. i read the review ur referring too, and i'm laughing my ** off rite now reading this. b u r n. love it.

what a poem!! beautifully written, i love the emotion thats gone into this, and nicely formatted. great work.

~Bex xx

I like this. Best kind of retaliation out there - and the ending line is wonderfully creepy.

"oh darling, why are you hiding? Alice wants you to come out and play." TEEHEE!! i love it. it's such a challenge and it makes me giggle. once again very well written. and i'm totally waiting for that ** to post anything so we can see if they really have room to talk.-aly

you have a very unique style. it grabs you by the throat and it's so damn direct. and that last italicized line is amazing. plus the way you wrote "You"- aw, damn, this is great.

Way to go!

*claps* You even manage to make anger look poetic and great. Honestly, that flamer made me laugh...he/she couldn't have been farther from the truth, after all.

I don't know if this is an insult or not. As far as I can see I see hat you are doing the same thing.

I see it as you venting out all of your thoughts of people on this site into your 'poem' (it is more of a paragraph hey?)

Its.. umm interesting to read what people have to say about those who read and reveiw peoples poetry.

I like this alot but the way you formatted it or whatever that is really turned me off. But I got past that and really loved it so if you keep writing I'm gonna keep reading. I cant wait to see your other stuff.

I don't think I've ever reviewed any work of your before. A mistake that I am rectifying at this moment. I saw said flame, and I believe (s)he couldn't be more wrong- you three are awesome to /the/ highest degree, and (s)he is most likely acting out of inscurities. I'd bet that (s)he is probably the type of kid that was/will be/is a school bully, verbally injuring people so that they /won't/ be better than him(her). Lovely poem- you hit it dead center.

youwrotethisperfectly.

i actually ended up writing a poem about it too, disgusing the way i felt at first because i didn't want to appear weak. but **, it hurt me. but you expressed it much more clearly and it's so raw and beautiful, and it's perfect. **, that review really ** me off but i didn't want to give the loser the satisfaction of seeing how much it hurt. so i wrote angst about it, naturally.

anyway, this is perfect.♥ alison

Good poem, babe. Go get her!