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| The Ferrett 2007-02-27 ch 3,  | abuseseverely twisted. I like the eye mising bit. Incredibly ouch. Anyway, ::)) |
| Diana =) 2006-10-25 ch 2, anon. | abusefirst few sentences, its supposed to be "an estranged" instead of "a astranged" =) |
| kamikai bomber 2006-10-11 ch 1, | abuseOk here is where you can send your entries for the Closed Door Contest! weedbunny_num1@yahoo.com |
| BAMBAMBOOM 2006-10-07 ch 1, | abuseVery nice! Good job :). |
| Rikichi's Buddy 2006-09-24 ch 1, | abusethis is really amazing! i loved how you wrote this. the style is just shockingly good! i'm almost depressed that there's only two chapters. |
| Androssganon 2006-09-19 ch 2, | abusewell. that's gross. ha ha ha! guess i shouldn't be talking, huh? ty for the review, dude! #50!ok, the only thing I would advise against in ur story is the language. I mean, its good for effect every once in a while, but not every other sentance. other than that, it's great!! keep it up! |
| tears of emerald 2006-08-26 ch 1, | abusewow. Really. Like, I hope this isn't a one-shot. I like it. |
| catastrophe25 2006-08-25 ch 1, | abusenice and dark atmosphere here, great style of writing.But just one thing, if you don't want this to be booted off by the mods don't rate it K, rate it T or something |