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dog.obsessed 2007-07-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseNice job! I love how you related the seasons to each other. it was really cute, and I loved how you described the seasons. Maybe a little more detail for each would be better.
rosefaerie 2007-06-29 ch 1,	abuseGreat! I loved that you saved spring until last... it made it all the more special that you were waiting for the seeds to grow. Good job, thanks for the reviews back! Rosefaerie
Last Place 2007-05-29 ch 1,	abuseThe style was consistent and descriptive. I liked it. ;]
Chameleon81 2007-05-10 ch 1,	abuseLovely poem. I liked how it looped around to the beginning. Very nice imagery. Very nice...
Tytherpol 2007-05-09 ch 1,	abuseNice imagery. I like it.
ThePoetMan 2007-02-17 ch 1,	abuseWOAH Vivid I can totaly sun on my hands lol I like it I got a new poem Its a sex poem lol
RedSlayer 2006-11-13 ch 1,	abuseI liked this poem a lot. They way you described each season was great, it really painted a picture in my head. I liked how you made each season different. For me, up in Alaska no mans land, there's two seasons, basically Winter br and Spring. ^^ Very good. Keep it up.
Princess-anna57 2006-11-02 ch 1,	abuseHey, wow! Excellent poem. Good descriptions!! ^_^ gives chocolate chip cookie, please write on! ~Anna~ ^_^
Caught By Myself 2006-10-29 ch 1,	abuseI like how the end of the poem goes back to the beginning. Very simple, but that's what's greatest about it. :D
Humaysha 2006-09-13 ch 1, anon.	abusehey, you know sometimes it feels as if the year goes by really really fast? I mean your poem reminded me how sometimes the season are incredibly short, i mean it was just summer and now school has started! oh well. anyway you poem was great, i really liked it. Love you lots, Humaysha
incognegro 2006-09-07 ch 1,	abuseI like this piece. I like the irony of warmth shivering through the body in the first lines. Each sentence concisely relays the seasons, and I like that. However, the end was disappointing to me--the last line, actually. I don't think it needs to be there, because it seems like a glittering generality. I do like the bit about planting seeds in the spring...that's open to a lot of interpretation. * keep on writing! I like the themes of your pieces.
Peter Harrison 2006-09-06 ch 1,	abuseIf it hadnt been for the last line, I would say something like "generic", but the last line saved the poem, and took it from generic, to unique, a loop of sorts. It would have been really impressive if you had talked about flowers in reference to summer the first time. Good poem. Peter
Bel Esprit 2006-09-06 ch 1,	abusewow, really good imagery. i like this poem because you really put a lot of thought into it. the connections you have between seasons and the metaphors you use to describe what your senses tell you is really interesting. i like how your words flow; they just sound so right. good job!
Jamino 2006-09-05 ch 1,	abuseHey there! I loved how some of your descriptions didn't fit in with the season in which they were describing! For example, shiver would usually relate to the cold, not the warmth! This suggests to me that theres something MORE to this poem than is written on the page. Did something negative happen to you during the summer? And although the descriptions of winter would suggest otherwise, you don't actually throw any snowballs, why not? And the seeds don't grow, instead you wait. Did they grow, do they symbolise something more? I love anything that raises so many questions, so likewise I love you! Loves ~Jamino
Anaare 2006-09-05 ch 1,	abuseA lovely poem, which I have enjoyed reading. Wonderful imagery! So, well done and thank you for the review.

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