That was a sad song. I can see how you could work it into a story.

I wrote a short story inspired by a song. The Beautiful Meadow was inspired by Frankie Laine's song The Girl in the Wood.

SirScott

Aww, it's so sad... :(

That was very sad.

I did like the story lost and found!

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You'll find out why Ji-ku is the way he is in my next story: Chronicles of Darkness: Persecution and Exile.

Kiki and Kenji's relationship will start progressing a bit faster.

Very deep story. I like the emotional depth of it. Your a very good writer. The space between the each setence and its description is great. I also like the title. It sets the mood of the story. Keep up the good work!

SD

The emotional depth and complexity of this is heartwrenching. Very well developed and written. Great write.

Aw...this was touching. Plus, I listened to 'Return' as I read it. Doubly touching.

The integration of the story and lyrics was very cool and professionally done-of course, nothing short of what I've come to expect from your awesome poetry-story-ness. _ A fun read, and a fun fav!