All your stuff is so ♥ romantic!♥ I love it! And I love how you said the sand "melts" in between your toes.

I love ya sis and you know that you are a great writer! This is so wonderful ♥

Here's a poem for you that I just wrote hehe *ahem*

if you're the ho then i'm the whoreif you're the bacon i'm the eggs

that's all i got so far aahahaha =D

Aww. This was really sweet. I liked it a lot.

SF

I love some of the concepts in this pice but I found it Rather disjointed. Lacking any scence of rythem in my opinion.