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| by His blood 2006-08-26 ch 1,  | abusei love the format, and the raw harsh meaning that just cuts through everything, and the way you don't hold this back. i love this, and i can relate in my own way. it's somehow beautiful, even though the bitterness and ... **, this hurts too much to read. definitely going on my favorites. 'he would ** her until the word was bled dry of any meaning' -- that is too painful to read, **, it hurts. ((thank you for all of your reviews, by the way -- i really appreciate them.)) |
| poetic abortion 2006-08-25 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Just, oh my GOD. Amazing. ~* Noelle |
| hey maria 2006-08-25 ch 1, | abuseI like the harsh sexual tones to this, but I don't like your style of squashingwordstogether and ((double-parentheses) and bold. I've seen that done way too many times. The poem itself was good, though. |