YOU BETTER GODDAMN UPDATE ALREADY BITCH (harsh much? good)


I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TO THE FUCKING CHARACTERS

this is a good story. im high (off the story)

i like stories about gay people
and romance


and mysteries
and fantasy

i think im gay...or bi...i dont think im straight though, because i always thought i was.


but now im doubting it.

but, like. who cares?


great story update SON

the drama is so high im about to gag

no really

btw why is this rated M...its not at that level...yet.


anyways, i guess i should read the LAST FUCKING CHAPTER YOU HAVE POSTED!

who the hell is tyler


and what does he mean by: "ben's kind of people"?


great update, my reviews are totally worthless

raely is to read on

raely is enjoying this work

yada, yada, yada

ok, im gonna ask another weird question.

is izzy and christian the gay ones...and the other straight, cause im not sure

anyways, great chapter (as usually...they just get better and better.)

well its really shitty now... ok that was really mean. im sorry (and im kidding!).

that was better then the chapteres before it because the ones before it are kind of...drab (no offence or anything).

anyways, this chapter (more than any other), made me question your sexuality even more.

and people call me nosy...

omg, get a life (lol)

and um, great chapter...

btw: are you gay (hello i write about gay ppl, why should i care)

i shall continue on with da story

raely is beast

raely is da bomb

raely is hawt

ur right, that was fun (btw my reviews are like no help at all!)

I must confess, I have been scanning the chapters, and don't really get why he is taking the photos...explain?

Other then that, it's good.

On to chapter...4?

Intersting chapter 2.

BTW, (in my opinion) you overdid the use of "Miss Anorectic" (the term).

moving on though...

I noticed your writing style uses a lot of "()'s" and italics. Just observing.

Another thing I found interesting, is that in my spanish class we had to chose spanish names, and I chose Cristian. Spanish for Christien (no, that's not my name...).

Great start, I shall read on!

Wow. And things finally make sense.
Chris and Haru are a cute couple. :)
I'm glad Ben's going to call Becky.
This was good.

You know, some of your writing is so depressing I need to stop and read comics in between paragraphs. Take that as a compliment, because that's how it's meant. It's "good depressing", if there is such a thing. Realistic depressing. Which is kind of depressing in-and-of-itself.
I might have to take a break from writing this review to read comics because it's depressing.
Anywoo...
Wow. Ben tried to commit suicide, huh? And Lana's gone? That's some crazy stuff. Wonder where it's going. On to the next chapter!

How many cups did they all drink?

Very well done. I wrote something similar which I love/hate so this brought me back to that time. The character of Ben is endlessly compelling mainly because he is so honest about everything and doesn't try to embellish anything or try to make himself look good. Anyway, good write.

Not bad, not at all. Well done.

Hey again, sorry it's taken so long for me to get to this.

Hmm, is the part at the beginning where Ben was "attempting" suicide after New Years, and then it went back in time to the night before New Years to explain why he did what he did? Or I may have that completely wrong, and that wasn't a really important part scene to the plot.

I liked the way you described Christian's dad; it was different. Christien still seems upset though. I think he gets upset every time when the subject about Ben looking at little girls gets brought up. Just like we know he was watching Ben when he was talking to Quinita, and she gave him her number. Is he jealous in a brooding sort of way? Anyways, you're doing a good job.