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Reviews For: Splotchy Sunrise
magnusthewolf 2007-02-02 . chapter 1
this is very well done. i love the descriptions you convey and the emotion evident to the reader. nice work! :) magnus
The Fourth Fate 2006-09-29 . chapter 1
I love love love the last two lines. Oh. And the way the images faded into each other. It sort of reminds me of a Taking Back Sunday music video, Make Damn Sure. Only this is more elegant, more eloqent, more graceful. I love it. The imagery was just genious.
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