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| Toothache 2006-08-26 ch 1,  | abuseIt's so cute.. in a funny sort of way. Rika and Devon sound so close. I envy your writing style. It's really interesting. (: |
| Redeemed 2006-08-26 ch 1, | abuseI loved it! You have such a great style, man, I'm so impressed. I enjoyed the cheeky phrases and witty humor. ( "Oh?" Rika asked. I didn't want to sound like a parrot, and Rika had already stolen the only thing I could thing of, so I just sat there looking expectant.) Clever line :) It's been a while since I've laughed out loud reading something. Keep it up! |