good so far!very refreshing writing style for the fantasy sectionlooking forward to morewill

Oh my. I am completely hooked on this story.

I love how you have the different views of Shawn and Marina telling the story- it's defiantly something you don't see very often, especially written as well as you have.

The plot is original, and I love the character's personalities. You must write more soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!