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Reviews For: A Love Unrequited

NewAgeRembrandt
2006-12-06
ch 1,
abuseI absolutely love this.

The rhyming seems a bit forced in places, but other than that, it's very good. And I like the message too.

My favorite verse:
"But like a drug
You have me hooked
I just can’t overlook
How deep I am
In a love unrequited"

Amazing job.
Padimate
2006-08-25
ch 1,
abuseIt's very good and very true. Good job.
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