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| NewAgeRembrandt 2006-12-06 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely love this. The rhyming seems a bit forced in places, but other than that, it's very good. And I like the message too. My favorite verse: "But like a drug You have me hooked I just can’t overlook How deep I am In a love unrequited" Amazing job. |
| Padimate 2006-08-25 ch 1, | abuseIt's very good and very true. Good job. |