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| forever and a half 2006-09-23 ch 1,  | abuseLMAO this is freaking hilarious. and well written. which is extremely hard to find, as it were. so kudos to you =] pity it's a one shot... i think it would have great potential as a story. honestly, your sense of humor is very refreshing and your spin on the classic medieval day stereotypes are... very good. yeah that was anticlimatic. heh i ran out of adjectives =] m stupendous! hah there's a good un! so yes. do consider it. i do sincerely believe it would be marvelous (YES i got another adjective!!) |
| Lady Katreina 2006-09-18 ch 1, | abuseLovely. Beautifully rendered. Ah what a work of art. And the story's okay too! lol, kidding. Thanks for the story. |
| Hell's first Icicle 2006-08-27 ch 1, | abuselmao. I love it. really, really love it. La Veego? brilliant. this whole story made me grin so wide mi cheeks still hurt, and mi family are(is?) STILL giving me weird looks bcoz of mi random insane bursts of laughter. i blame u. but, i'll let u live, bcoz this story was pure genius. |
| Rockcrystal 2006-08-26 ch 1, | abusewow i thought u like quit :P...looks like ur bak at it again eh...this is gud...i like reading adventure related stories...Rupees?...Luv Shan |
| Gezi 2006-08-26 ch 1, | abuse:) I love your humor. Yay for you! This is going in my faves! |
| B.T. Lines 2006-08-26 ch 1, | abuseHILARIOUS! |
| aphroditeseyes 2006-08-26 ch 1, | abuse"The mind boggled. Heh. Or maybe it was just the ale. Yeah. It was probably the ale." Hah, I loved that bit. And the way you ended it. S'good. I think it would be nice if you continued it, although it does pretty well as a one-shot. Anyway, congratulations, you haven't lost your touch. Does this mean you'll be continuing with your other stories? Please do! |
| maplegirl 2006-08-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseAre you back? That was incredibly funny. A parody of sorts, yes? I loved Symon. I thought he was gorgeous. The kind of unsuspecting hero that gets everything thrust on their shoulders. haha. pity it was a one shot. you could probably go somewhere with this if u put a lot of effort into the characters. |
| Savina 2006-08-26 ch 1, | abuseFirst to review, it seems? Anyways, I feel unworthy reading your writing, it's just very slick and seems like it was easy to write. Too bad it's just a one-shot (so far?), it leaves me hanging a bit. Either way, love it as usual, especially "La Veego". ^_~ |