Reviews for Happy One Month Anniversary

Mr. Raven 2008-09-03 ch 1,	i love the tone of this piece, its even and controlled, yet the undercurrents of emotion are almost boundless. i especially love this line: "But a year once today, I think he forgot me." it just strikes me. powerful stuff. Mr.Raven
give me back my childhood 2006-08-26 ch 1,	I'm not sure if it's meant to be, but I did feel pretty sad reading this poem. nice work! (: