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Reviews For: A Lesson Well Learned

My name is deadly
2006-10-08
ch 1,
Wow i really liked that! it actually made you think about things outside the story!! good job!
The Un-great-ful
2006-08-26
ch 1,
Wow, good.

I really like the coldness of it all, you wrote it well. Maybe it'd be better if you split it into chapters though, its a bit long for just the one chapter.

Nonetheless, good story.

Alan.
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