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| My name is deadly 2006-10-08 ch 1, | Wow i really liked that! it actually made you think about things outside the story!! good job! |
| The Un-great-ful 2006-08-26 ch 1, | Wow, good. I really like the coldness of it all, you wrote it well. Maybe it'd be better if you split it into chapters though, its a bit long for just the one chapter. Nonetheless, good story. Alan. |