FINALLY. So we had a minor identity crisis, then we wrote a wonderful shiny poem to combat it. Whe? I love: 'sha,sha,sha,shaking', and the fact that you mentioned guitars, at all, :P...

Wicked ending :) I liked the way it's written...almost like you'd write a play. Interesting and original!

oh. i like it. the brackets work very bonly. i love the second stanza (wooh i learnt something in english P) x