Reviews for california cliche'

Violet Marx 2006-11-25 ch 1,	abusewow. you really caught california frozen in words!
boys kiss girls 2006-08-28 ch 1,	abuseI loved the last stanza. It reminds me of when we were walking out of Universal Studios and there were no stars. I also like the added tone of tragedy and hope, too.
ode to a firefly 2006-08-27 ch 1,	abuseIt's a beautiful poem, really. I love the formatting...but California just isn't one of my favorite places to be. ♥Christine
Aquafied 2006-08-26 ch 1,	abusei dont really like it at all i have seen the hollywood sign once and i think it was during the day it is a dead hill with the words hollywood.i dont see the attraction
tree plebian 2006-08-26 ch 1,	abuseI wish I could relate to this. BUt i'm English so I don't know much about California. You write really well though- it's really witty. Nice job.