By the by, you need to take out the comma in the quote "I suppose, you can guess what I lost." It shouldn't be there, both for the sake of grammar and because as a natural transcription of speech it wouldn't work. This isn't always how it works- sometimes you can cheat one for the sake of the other. Just a bit.Not the case here.Fun stuff, though.

Heh, damn women, they never know just when to quit.

Anyway, no plot, I can dig it. Unserious and pointless writing, that's my kind of man.

Keep it up.