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| Two Skips 2008-07-24 ch 6,  | abuseAlright. Effing amazing and anyone who says otherwise is selling something. i have an idea for you - how about you update? =D |
| Iron Woman 2008-07-14 ch 6, | abuseplease update! i really want to know what happends next. please update as soon as possible! |
| I Murder on Impulse 2008-04-18 ch 6, | abusehaha You need to write more haha! |
| JadeGoddess 2008-04-16 ch 6, | abuseGenna is hilarious...I hope you update soon |
| Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-04-10 ch 6, | abuseI like this! |
| jason lee 2008-03-17 ch 3, | abuseHey -- just wanted to suggest that you might want to work harder on the dialogue, because it's definitely clunky. The execution could be better, otherwise, it's interesting. Best, Jason |
| The Mango Tango 2008-02-16 ch 6, | abuse): please update soon haha ill give you a cokie no wait cake no wait better more a cake with cookies in it...haha |
| FutureWriter 2008-02-13 ch 6, | abuseI found this story through the SKoW awards and am really enjoying it. It's well written, and has a great mix of humor, romance and drama. I love Reese and Devon, they're hot together. And I'm anxious to read more, so update when you can! |
| kimheami 2008-02-07 ch 4, | abuseso just curious if you are gonna continue with this story... i really like it and i wish you would! |
| Eyeliner-Abuser 2008-01-29 ch 6, | abuseGreat story. The sexual tension's wafting off the pc screen, and damn is it hot! On the other hand, that may be a sign I need to turn the heating down. The only question I've got, really, is why the chapter titles and story title are both written in French, but the only language really featured in this story is Spanish. It doesn't quite add up for me :/ And with that oh-so-intruiging question, I shall sign off =D |
| akaCHEEKS 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abusealright adding you to my favorite stories list! haha |
| SamanthaNicole 2008-01-10 ch 3, | abuseWarning: This review may or may not be incredibly ridiculous and pointless. It is late, I am tired, and my brain isn't functioning properly. You have been warned. Anyway. Reese's shopping habits remind me a lot of a friend of mine. No matter what, or how little money I have, I always end up buying something. ALWAYS. Good for Iago. I'm exactly the opposite. I put my papers off until the very last minute. My first semester of college, my final was a 15 page paper, and I ended up writing it the night before. Not the greatest decision ever, but I still managed to pull an A in the class.Unfortunately, it's kept me repeating the same stunt over and over, haha. What a sexy way to do shots. M. Me likey Quinn. Holy crap, it's late. Chapter four will have to wait until tomorrow. I'm sure I won't be disappointed. |
| SamanthaNicole 2008-01-08 ch 2, | abuseAhh. Finally found some free-time to return to this story. [Okay. Now she was dressed.] *Snickers* Yes. Only, she's just wearing a shirt. Which is awesome in its own right. Who! *Fans self* Rushed, unchecked sex, when written as well as this, is always a delight. I'll admit, I've burned rice, too. But it was only once, and only because I wasn't paying attention. Clearly... Ugh. My hair does the exact same thing. I take the time to straighten it, and as soon as humidity hits it, huge, obnoxious waves everywhere. I can sympathize. ["Shut the ** up, Sunshine."] Is it horrible that I do the same thing? Be loud around people with hangovers, that is. I'm just guessing, but I bet they run into Quinn at the mall. Lovely and entertaining, as always, dear! Cheers, Sammy |
| Faithfully Yours 2008-01-07 ch 6, | abuseAh! There's no more?? I'm sad. =( Update soon?! |
| Roman Candles 2008-01-06 ch 6, | abuseGreat story so far. I really like the characters and the plot. Please update soon. |