Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: Way of the Waltz
Alasin Noire 2007-04-04 . chapter 1
*sighs* oh that was fantastic... but I think I might be missing something. Who was she really? Someone important or really just a girl? Or his wife and they were playing a game? Any answer, or none, this was FANTASTIC and I loved it. You really do need to write a full length novel.
Gaius Marius Pera 2007-02-03 . chapter 1
Beautifully written...the luxury and heart-warming emotion just spills out in every corner of the story. Really lovely, thanks!
Silvestria 2006-11-20 . chapter 1
Oh lovely! I've been listening to Strauss as I read this. Very sweet and fluffy but without being cloying. Thanks for that. :)
Kohlomere 2006-09-10 . chapter 1
I must admit, that was a little hard to follow. For a moment, I wasn't sure of who was speaking or of their gender. But the language was beautiful, E.
temerity 2006-09-06 . chapter 1
Thank you for your review! But as to your writing...

...it's lovely! I'm a fan of historical stories. :)"The snow is lovely, but Old Man Winter has no desire to make you his queen." You have such a talent with word choice. I was a bit confused with the frequent point of view changes, but the story was very creative and sweetly fluffy.
Lady Wrye 2006-09-04 . chapter 1
A very cute story. I love it :)
Gaillen's Mirror 2006-08-30 . chapter 1
Oh this was an excellant story. Top marks and thank you so much for the reveiw you gave me. Actually the story came first and I really had no intention of posting it but my brother convinced me.

One thing I must say for this story however, is that the point of veiws changed so quickly and without warning that at first I was confused as to who was talking and who was not. After the second time I actually fell into the rhythm of the story and it didn't bother me so bad. But you might want to give some form of warning to the shift in the POV.

Otherwise, very good and very sweet. I was smiling the entire time I was reading. Very sweet, oh, and good use of the nobility.
Return to Top